
Originally Posted by
Nunzio
I don't mind the typeface for the title, but I don't think it looks good on the spine in yellow. What really bothers me is that you don't have a proper margin before the bleed on the back.
Also, the G in Cleaning on the back goes over Dr Robotinik's leg. His hand covering the Genesis logo is enough, you could make the type smaller and then left align it with the body copy with the margin that you already have for the headline. It would be better.
I like the drop shadow a lot though. Gonna steal that one for myself!